I came to see the wounded
where I’m from their not around
I came to see the wounded
and you’ll never guess what I found
broken wings and bandages
and blood shed on the ground
I was afraid to speak out loud
a single voice, a shattering sound
I came to see the wounded
and I saw their souls rise
I came to see the wounded
and saw failure after many tries
broken bodies and broken souls
the truth after so many lies
the closer I looked at the bodies
I didn’t want to believe my eyes
I came to see the wounded
and I can no longer pretend
I came to see the wounded
instead I saw the end
I saw the pain, I saw the blood
the things I once called friend
but I also saw the bodies
somehow no one could mend
I came to see the wounded
and their self-inflicted pain
I came to see the wounded
to convince myself I was sane
I saw the scars that shouldn’t be
and the ever present stain
I wanted so badly to reach out
but I forced myself to refrain
I came to see the wounded
and was surprised at what I saw
I came to see the wounded
and I stood staring in awe
for what I found before me
when stripped down to the raw
was a vision of myself
and every self-inflicted flaw
I came to see the wounded
I didn’t have far to go
I came to see the wounded
I neglected the one I know
pointing everywhere else
the most dangerous foe
always escaping the mirror
please tell me it isn’t so
Written for DVerse open link night, hosted by Grace
This is an amazing poem, Carol Anne. You came to see the wounded and saw yourself with every self-inflicted wound! Very sad, but a great poem.
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Thank you Dwight I wrote that one a long time ago, no it’s still makes me sad reading it today 😘😘
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I can imagine it does! Still a great one!
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Oh thanks Dwight! Your so awesome to say so! ❤
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I think we are often both the wounded and what’s worse also the perpetrator…
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Yes, totally agree with you 🎀💞😊
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What a powerful writing Carol! It is outstanding
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Thanks, Cheryl 😊😍😚🌷🌷
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Love the haunting repetition of : I came to see the wounded.
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Thank you, Grace 🥰🥰
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The repetition is so effective, Carol Anne–a poem for reading aloud. It’s so very sad though, and I’m glad you wrote it a long time ago. 💙
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Thank you 🎀😺😍😍😺🌷🌷
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You’re welcome! 🌸💙
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🤗🤗🤗
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I like the journey you take in your poem. Not an easy one, but so rewarding.
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Yes, very rewarding, thank you for the kind comment 💞💞😁
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You’re welcome ❤
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🌻💕
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SO very powerful and insightful. With the rhythm and repetition, it is outstanding read aloud.
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Thanks Mish. I’m so happy you like it. ❤
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Well done, made the think as I pondered each verse. 👏👏
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Thank you 💖💖💖
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My pleasure! 💖
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😊😁😊
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There is no way a reader can finish your poem without feeling a sense of pain, sadness. Well done, Carol Anne.
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Thanks Helen! I appreciate your reading it!
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