Sen-hai Saturday #27

Silent peaks at dawn
mountains draped in drifting fog
a hush before light.

Crowds chase sunrise high—
mountains vanish into fog,
yet selfies persist.

SenHai Saturday #27 – I Write Her

30 responses to “Sen-hai Saturday #27”

  1. ivor20 Avatar

    Cleverly done, Carol … 📃😍🌏

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Ivor 🌷🌷🌠🌠💜💜

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  2. SRIKANTH Avatar

    The first poem paints such a serene, almost sacred image—the quiet majesty of mountains at dawn, wrapped in a hushed, drifting fog. It feels like a moment of pure, undisturbed reverence for nature.

    Then the second haiku cleverly captures the modern reality, where the same majestic scene becomes a backdrop for our constant documentation. The line “yet selfies persist” is wonderfully observant and speaks volumes about our times.

    Together, they form a thoughtful commentary on the different ways we experience and interact with the natural world—both in quiet contemplation and through the lens of shared moments. Lovely work

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks so much 🌠🌠🌷🌷

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  3. Violet Lentz Avatar

    beautifully done, Carol Anne.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Violet! 😘😘

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you! 💜💜

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome ☺️

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        ✨✨🥰🥰

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      3. Sadje Avatar

        💙💙💙

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Pooja! Xoxo

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      1. P. J. Gudka Avatar

        You’re so welcome!

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        ✨🤗✨😘😘

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  5. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Your last stanza made me smile, Carol Anne!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Nolcha! 💜💜

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  6. poetisatinta Avatar

    So good Carol anne 🙌

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Ange! 💜💜🌷🌷

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  7. Susi Bocks Avatar

    So, so good, Carol Anne! Perfect imagery of the scene provided! ❤

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Susi! 💜💜

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      1. Susi Bocks Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  8. draliman Avatar

    Lovely, and very true about the selfies 🙂

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  9. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This poem is insightful into human behaviour.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Robbie 💖💖

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