Silent peaks at dawn
mountains draped in drifting fog—
a hush before light.
Crowds chase sunrise high—
mountains vanish into fog,
yet selfies persist.
Silent peaks at dawn
mountains draped in drifting fog—
a hush before light.
Crowds chase sunrise high—
mountains vanish into fog,
yet selfies persist.
Cleverly done, Carol … 📃😍🌏
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The first poem paints such a serene, almost sacred image—the quiet majesty of mountains at dawn, wrapped in a hushed, drifting fog. It feels like a moment of pure, undisturbed reverence for nature.
Then the second haiku cleverly captures the modern reality, where the same majestic scene becomes a backdrop for our constant documentation. The line “yet selfies persist” is wonderfully observant and speaks volumes about our times.
Together, they form a thoughtful commentary on the different ways we experience and interact with the natural world—both in quiet contemplation and through the lens of shared moments. Lovely work
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Thanks so much 🌠🌠🌷🌷
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beautifully done, Carol Anne.
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Lovely poem
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Ooh loved it!
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You’re so welcome!
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Your last stanza made me smile, Carol Anne!
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So good Carol anne 🙌
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So, so good, Carol Anne! Perfect imagery of the scene provided! ❤
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Lovely, and very true about the selfies 🙂
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Thanks, Robbie 💖💖
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