I chose the 3rd painting to write my poem on!

Here it is!

Back in the day, in nineteen-oh-nine,
When time moved slow and the world kept time,
Horses clopped down cobbled streets,
While iron rails hummed distant beats.

Gaslight flickered at dusk’s soft call,
Shadows danced on a parlor wall,
Ink-stained letters, careful and neat,
Traveled weeks just to say we meet.

Men wore hats with measured pride,
Women stitched dreams at evening’s side,
Factories breathed their sooty sighs,
While chimneys wrote smoke into skies.

Newsboys shouted the dawn awake,
Coins rang sharp for a paper’s sake,
Names of wonders—flight, machine—
Spoken like magic, half-unseen.

No glowing screens, no rushing days,
Just patient hands and hopeful ways,
A future whispered, bold yet fine,
Back in the day… in nineteen-oh-nine.

8 responses to “Back in the day, in 1909”

  1. Violet Lentz Avatar

    I love this! It should be a song!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      It has that feel to it, doesn’t it? 😊

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  2. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    I adore the last stanza, Carol Anne. We should take a lesson from it.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I know, definitely we should xox

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  3. ben Alexander Avatar

    I really enjoyed this, Carol Anne. “Ink-stained letters, careful and neat, / traveled weeks just to say we meet” makes me slow down and feel the patience of that world.

    ~David

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, David. Glad you enjoyed it. 😘😘

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