This story is totally made up. But I wish it was true!

😃

The bus rattled like an old tambourine as it lurched toward the Royal Albert Hall, every window trembling with the excitement packed inside. Someone in the back was already singing—off-key, enthusiastic, fearless.

I clutched my ticket the way people in romance novels clutch love letters, afraid it might evaporate if I loosened my fingers. An Adele concert. I’d tried to play it cool all day, but my heart had been drumming a four-beat anthem since sunrise.

The driver—an elderly man with a neon-green tie—kept glancing in the mirror. “You lot going to church or something?” he asked, eyebrow arched.

“In a way,” someone said. Laughter followed, soft and knowing.

When we turned a corner and the Hall came into view—its domed crown glowing like a lantern—the whole bus fell silent. The kind of hush that descends before truth arrives.

The bus groaned to a stop. We spilled out, a small chorus of hearts tuned to the same frequency.

Inside, Adele would sing. Outside, for just a moment longer, we breathed in the promise of it.

Written for simply six minutes, hosted by Christine.

Simply 6 Minutes – Welcome to the Challenge: 12/09/2025 – Stine Writing

4 responses to “On the bus, on our way to a concert!”

    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you 😘😘

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  1. SRIKANTH Avatar

    Carol, your story is a little masterpiece of anticipation. The way you capture that communal, almost sacred excitement is just beautiful. The love-letter ticket, the “hush that descends before truth arrives,” the “small chorus of hearts tuned to the same frequency”—these aren’t just descriptions, they’re shared feelings perfectly crystallized. You made us all feel the glorious, trembling promise of that night. Thank you for this wonderful glimpse into a moment made magical.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed my story 💖💖

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