The old house, with its wildly overgrown garden, was silent, secretive. Vines clung to the cracked walls as though guarding whatever lingered inside. Mara pushed open the gate, its hinges sighing like something waking from a long sleep. She had returned only to retrieve a single box from the attic, but the air felt charged, expectant, as if the house remembered her better than she remembered herself.

Dust spiraled in her flashlight’s beam. Each step forward echoed too loudly, swallowing the hush rather than breaking it. The family portraits were still on the wall, the faces slightly blurred by time, their eyes following her with a familiarity she didn’t welcome.

In the attic, the box waited exactly where she’d left it. She knelt, hands trembling, and lifted the lid. Inside lay letters she’d never written but recognized instantly—her handwriting looping across yellowed pages describing events she had not yet lived. A cold shiver crept up her spine.

The last envelope bore tomorrow’s date. She hesitated, then opened it. Her breath stopped. The message was short, written in frantic strokes: “Leave now. Do not look back.”

Behind her, the floorboards groaned, answering. She ran as darkness gathered, swallowing the house whole.

Fandango’s Story Starter #225 – Facts, Fictions & Fantasies

4 responses to “Leave now, do not look back”

  1. newepicauthor Avatar

    That is a scary house, nice story, Carol Anne.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Jim. I appreciate your comment. 🌷🌷

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  2. SRIKANTH Avatar

    Dear Carol,

    What a beautifully crafted piece! You have a wonderful talent for building atmosphere and tension. The opening lines draw us in with their vivid imagery—the sighing gate, the overgrown garden, the sense of something alive within the silence. The progression from curiosity to dread feels perfectly paced, and the concept of discovering letters from one’s own future is both chilling and brilliant.

    The final line, with darkness swallowing the house whole, leaves just the right haunting echo. This is the kind of story that lingers long after reading. Thank you for sharing such an evocative and gripping tale—I truly enjoyed it!

    Looking forward to reading more of your work.
    Warmly,
    Srikanth

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      You are always so kind. I really love that you like my work and enjoy reading it. 😁😁

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