Just peachy

Another night of chasing hours
as they slip between my fingers—
the moon is wide-awake with me,
a silent witness to my linger.

The ceiling hums its quiet tune,
the walls breathe in the dark;
every thought turns neon bright,
each worry leaves a mark.

By dawn my eyes are half-stitched open,
my mind a tangled, fraying thread;
someone asks me how I’m doing—
I smile, “Oh, just peachy,”
though I’m mostly made of dread.

Still I rise, though sleep has left me,
its echoes fading out of reach;
a tired soul still moving forward—
even shadows learn to teach.

Just Peachy – Word of the Day Challenge

4 responses to “Just peachy”

  1. SRIKANTH Avatar

    This is a beautiful and deeply resonant piece, Carol. You’ve captured the visceral, lonely poetry of insomnia with such precise and haunting imagery—the hours slipping through fingers, the moon as a wide-awake witness, thoughts turning “neon bright.” The contrast between the inner fraying thread and the outer, performative “Oh, just peachy” is heartbreakingly true. The closing lines are particularly powerful, offering a quiet, resilient hope: “a tired soul still moving forward—even shadows learn to teach.” It’s a masterful blend of weariness and wisdom. Thank you for sharing this.🌷🤝

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. 😁

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  2. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Fellow terrible sleeper here! This really captures it!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I’m lucky if I get two or three hours a night 💖💖

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