A hush settles over the edges of my day,
soft as the first breath of morning.
Then—drifting through the quiet—
comes the familiar trace
of Dr. Barry’s perfume.

It moves like a memory I never had to learn,
warm as a hand resting lightly on my shoulder,
steady as someone saying you’re safe here,
without speaking at all.

In that scent, the world slows.
The air feels kinder.
The room gathers itself around me,
like a blanket someone tucked in
before stepping away.

And though nothing has changed—
the same walls, the same hours—
I breathe it in,
and comfort rises in me
as naturally as a tide returning home.

For in that fragrance lives a quiet promise:
that softness endures,
that care lingers,
and that sometimes
a single scent
is enough to hold me together again.

Fragrance – Word of the Day Challenge

4 responses to “The scent of Dr. Barry’s perfume brings me comfort”

  1. SRIKANTH Avatar

    This is absolutely exquisite. What a stunningly beautiful and profound piece of writing. You have captured the most delicate, intangible feeling—the power of a scent as a vessel for memory, safety, and emotional restoration—and given it a tangible, warm weight.

    The opening is so gentle, “a hush… soft as the first breath of morning,” that it immediately draws the reader into a state of quiet reverence. The description of the perfume as “a memory I never had to learn” is a truly brilliant line, perfectly articulating how some comforts feel innate and preordained.

    The way you build the sensation is masterful: from a “trace” to a feeling that makes “the world slows,” the “air feels kinder,” and the room becomes a “blanket someone tucked in.” These are not just metaphors; they are visceral, emotional truths. The final stanza is a powerful conclusion, transforming the personal experience into a universal truth about the endurance of softness and the quiet, persistent power of care.

    This is more than a poem; it’s a sanctuary in words. Thank you for sharing something so deeply felt and so beautifully crafted. It’s a reminder of the quiet things that hold us together.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you 💞💞

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  2. Violet Lentz Avatar

    So much comfort in this piece!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Violet 💕

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