Yvette is our host and she has challenged us to write a syllabic poem using the word veil. I’ve written a tanka.
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A veil of soft mist,
hides the dawn’s unspoken truth—
petals hush the breeze.
Beneath silence, light unfolds,
whispering what night concealed.
#TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge No. 37, The Veil, 11/04/25 – Tanka Tuesday
Yes, the light cannot but shed light!
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Yes! Truth! ❤
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A poem full of secrets – ‘hush’, ‘silence’, ‘concealed’. I liked the rhythm in the poem.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful poem, Carol Anne! Thanks for participating!
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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