She arrived seven minutes late—just enough to be interesting. The restaurant’s candles flickered in quiet applause as she entered, her black evening gown catching the light like spilled ink. Heads turned, as they always did.

He stood when he saw her, awkward but eager. His profile picture hadn’t lied—he was ordinary, kind-eyed, the kind of man who said “ma’am” to waitresses. He offered his hand. She took it, cool and soft, and smiled like a secret.

Over dinner, he told stories about hiking, about his dog, about wanting something real. She laughed at the right moments, stirred her wine, watched him talk. Every time he asked about her, she deflected—“Oh, I’d rather hear about you.”

When dessert came, she leaned closer. “You’re even better in person,” she whispered. He blushed.

Outside, the night air was velvet. She suggested a walk. The streetlights carved her features into something almost tender.

At the corner, she stopped. “I had a lovely time,” she said. Her smile widened—too wide now, almost shimmering. “I don’t usually do this.”

He barely had time to ask what before her reflection vanished from the puddle beside them, and the air around him grew cold.

By morning, his dating profile would be gone.

And somewhere, another message would be sent from a new account:
“Hi there. You have such a kind face.”

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #404 – Creative Experiments and More

8 responses to “The woman in the black dress”

  1. SRIKANTH Avatar

    This is a wonderfully crafted piece of micro-fiction. The atmosphere is palpable, and the slow reveal of the supernatural element is executed with chilling precision. It’s a hauntingly beautiful modern take on a succubus or siren myth, set against the backdrop of contemporary loneliness and digital dating.

    A few elements I particularly admired:

    · The Opening Line: “She arrived seven minutes late—just enough to be interesting.” It’s a perfect, character-defining detail that sets the tone immediately.
    · Sensory Details: The “candles flickered in quiet applause,” the gown “like spilled ink,” the “velvet” night air—these create a rich, cinematic texture.
    · The Pivot Point: The moment her smile becomes “too wide now, almost shimmering” is the masterful turn from romantic intrigue to unease.
    · The Chilling Implication: The final lines connect the ancient horror to the modern cycle of online dating, making it feel both timeless and utterly contemporary.

    Thank you for sharing this exquisite and spine-tingling story

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I’m so glad you liked my story thank you for the wonderful feedback xx

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  2. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Spooky, but interesting! You’ve got into the Halloween mood 😱 😊

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Yes, I tried, thanks Rena 🤣🤍🤍

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  3. Dan Avatar

    Wow! What a great and short horror story.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it 😁😁

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  4. Susi Bocks Avatar

    OMG! So many different questions careening in my head! So well written, had me hook, line and sinker from the very beginning, felt so invested in the outcome, and so many mysteries about what happened! You did a splendid job with this story, Carol Anne!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you so much susi 🤍💝💕

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