Jaideep’s prompt guidelines
This week, we’re playing with contrast:
Write a poem where form and content are at odds.
I chose to write a limerick, and write about loss.
A silence now hangs in the air,
Where laughter once lived without care.
The chair sits alone,
A shadow has grown,
And absence is all that is there.
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/09/10/w3-prompt-176-weave-written-weekly/
Very well done Carol.
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An excellent limerick and contrast!
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Carol Anne, your limerick hits that bittersweet note perfectly. The playful rhythm makes the sense of loss stand out even more—it really lingers.
~David
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A very sad limerick, Carol Anne. 💕 Brilliantly written.
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Sometimes the simplest forms carry the deepest pain. ‘Where laughter once lived without care’ creates such a beautiful contrast—the limerick’s bounce against the stillness of loss creates this incredibly moving effect.
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Thanks! I’m delighted you enjoyed it! X
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hi, Carol Anne 🥰
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Lisa Paul, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/09/17/w3-prompt-177-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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