Mom’s shepherds pie

In the heart of home where warm lights glow,
Mom stirs a pot, all soft and slow.
The scent drifts through each room and hall—
A savory song, a comfort call.

The sizzle starts, the onions dance,
With ground beef browned in seasoned trance.
Carrots chopped and peas so green,
A golden dream in a kitchen scene.

A splash of broth, a pinch of thyme,
Her hands move with a rhythm, time
Has taught her well the perfect way
To chase a heavy world away.

Then comes the mash, so smooth and light,
Piled high and peaked just right—
A buttery quilt, warm clouds above,
Sealed with care and baked with love.

The oven hums, the minutes tick,
Each second slow, each craving quick.
And when she lifts that bubbling dish,
It grants a wish—oh yes, that wish.

Steam rises like a holy prayer,
Potatoes browned, the meat laid bare.
One bite and all the noise is gone,
You’re safe, you’re full, you’re never alone.

For no fine feast or grand café
Could match the pie Mom makes this way—
A simple thing, yet none compare
To shepherd’s pie made with her care.

12 responses to “Mom’s shepherds pie”

  1. Sheree Avatar

    I can smell that shepherds pie!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      It was really good 🌷🪷🌷🥕🫑🧄🧅

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  2. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is gorgeously encapsulated! I can picture the scene so clearly – especially love;

    “Steam rises like a holy prayer,
    Potatoes browned, the meat laid bare.
    One bite and all the noise is gone.”

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, a lot of love goes into mom‘s cooking 🙂🩷🩷

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    I love shepherds pie,Carol Anne, but a vegetarian version. Your poem made my mouth water.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Oh, I like the vegetarian version too, I love shepherds pie and all forms ❤️❤️

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  4. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    What a yummy poem, Carol anne!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you so much nolcha 😀🙂

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  5. lifelessons Avatar

    One of my favorite meals now rendered as a favorite poem that accomplishes its task in arousing both appetite and memory! Beautifully done, Carol Anne.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, Judy. Appreciate your kind comment. 💞💞

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  6. rothpoetry Avatar

    Reading your fun poem made me hungry, Carol Anne. She must have bee3n a wonderful cook!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Yes, she is, she’s an amazing cook 💛💛

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