Some people say I’m off my trolley,
That gears have slipped and gone awry,
They whisper soft with tilted heads,
While watching madness cloud my sky.

They say I laugh at hollow things,
At clocks that melt and shadows crawl,
They say I walk where reason ends,
And speak with ghosts that line the hall.

They think my thoughts are rust and smoke,
Just cogs that turn with no control,
But I have maps they’ll never read,
Etched deep inside my fractured soul.

The rails I ride are steep and strange,
Through tunnels made of blood and bone,
The sun here sets in shades of black,
And midnight sings in undertone.

A broken bell rings in my head—
It tolls for those who’ve come too near,
And every chime recalls a name
I stitched from silence, loss, and fear.

Some people say I’m off my trolley,
But they don’t see the track I tread.
To them I’m mad, a joke, a tale—
To me, the world is worse instead.

So let them point and pity me,
Let sane men scoff and turn away,
I ride the edge where angels fall,
And know the price they’ve yet to pay.

Trolley – Word of the Day Challenge

28 responses to “Some people say I’m off my trolley”

  1. ivor20 Avatar

    We’re all off our trolley
    we all like our Lollie’s
    we all forget the brolly
    life is a hectic folly
    so best we stay jolly
    and always chat to Polly

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Ha ha Ivor 😁😁

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  2. Lisa or Li Avatar

    I have maps they’ll never read

    I feel some ambivalence in reading. In one sense I feel sorry for those who cannot navigate that map for one reason or another. In another sense, I’m glad they don’t know the way. Raw poem, Carol Anne.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, Lisa 💞💞

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re welcome ❤

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        🌷🌷🌷

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    2. tenzenmen Avatar

      “I have maps they’ll never read” – this line stood out to me as well. Love it.

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      1. Carol anne Avatar

        Thank you so much 😆

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  3. petrujviljoen Avatar

    Second time I’m saying this today: it’s much the same way with me. I perpetually walk around in a daze and it’s a problem – for other people! Smiles.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Well, as long as it’s not a problem for you, there’s no issue then, I mean other people that’s their problem, not yours ❤️❤️

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  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    Wow! This is a great one, Carol Anne. The flow of your poem goes so well. The images are wonderful. It is amazing how we judge others by first impressions and have no idea the track they ride on.

    I really liked this line:

    The sun here sets in shades of black,
    And midnight sings in undertone.

    No one who sees can fully comprehend what you go through when you don’t!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Agreed, everyone is quick to judge others but they don’t know their story ❤️❤️

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  5. rothpoetry Avatar

    I also really love your creative way of using the prompt, trolley!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you 💜💜

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome1

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        😀💓💓

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  6. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    I LOVE your poem, Carol anne!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you 😆😚🥰

      Like

  7. Kim Whysall-Hammond Avatar

    Oh- what a fantastic poem Carol Anne! So well written and so good…

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Hi Kim, thank you 💓💓💚💚😜❤️❤️

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      1. Kim Whysall-Hammond Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    We should not care too much about what others say… the world is quite mad anyway

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I agree with you we’re all a little mad ❤️❤️

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  9. Ain - UA Avatar

    Absolutely SUPERB. CADENCE, rhythm, tone, voice, theme, rhyme….hope we have lost our reason…I really like the way it is delivered, almost flippant, but not quite. Great verse, really good.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks so much, so glad you liked it 😜🤩🩷🩷

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