D-verse Monday quadrille

Lisa is our host for today’s D-verse quadrille. She says:

Write a quadrille (exactly 44 words, minus the title) using the word twelve.

Twelve hours of rainfall

With no let up

Pelting my window panes

Like the sound of

Shattering glass

I sit here breathing

Deep, shallow and try

To will this rain away

I want to sleep but

Sleep doesn’t want to find me

No not ever!

48 responses to “D-verse Monday quadrille”

  1. Jenny Frye Avatar

    Beautifully written 🤗

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Oh thanks Jenny! Your so sweet! 😁😁

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      1. Jenny Frye Avatar

        You’re very welcome Sweetheart 🤗🥰

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        😙😙😙🤗🤗🤗

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    I love the sound of rain on the window pane, but twelve hours is far too long. I prefer shorter showers.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Lol me too Kim! Short bursts of rain are ok!

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  3. merrildsmith Avatar

    That’s a lot of rain. It would keep me up, too!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I am always up when it rains! The slightest noise wakes me up! 🙂

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      1. merrildsmith Avatar

        I am generally a light sleeper, too.

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        That’s good, I’m glad you sleep at least, that’s something

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Carol Anne, so sorry that the rain doesn’t make you sleepy. Twelve hours straight is quite the drenching. Hoping it all soaks into the soil or runs to the lake/stream/river/ocean. Flooding can be a real inconvenience.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Luckily I live on a hill, so flooding is not an issue! Thank creator! Xx

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      1. Carol anne Avatar

        💜💜💜

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  5. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

    Nice poem, Carol. Wishing you sweet dreams soon!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks but the sweet dreams are nowhere to be found 😀

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  6. Sadje Avatar

    Well written Carol.

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        My pleasure

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        ❤️❤️❤️

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  7. Truedessa Avatar

    The rain has been going on for hours – flooding everywhere here in the state. Hopefully, your rain will stop and you can get some much needed sleep.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Unfortunately I didn’t get any sleep, I’m off now just made coffee 😊

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  8. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

    Perfect poem to go with our weather today! I didn’t even know it was supposed to rain until I heard the rain hitting the front window.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Hi Christine, I’m sorry it rained all day there 🧡🧡

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      1. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        Well, it saves me the time of having to water. Down here it is so hot all day that I have water once or twice every day! Luckily the town supplies reclaimed water for watering the plants and lawn. It would be much too expensive as we have to pay for water.

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        We had to pay for water for a while, now though, we don’t. Thank god!

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      3. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        I wish we didn’t. I always worry about it when we have big jobs like when we need to fill our pool! They give you a discount if you get a letter from the pool company saying that you had to empty it to repair it. We did it once and now we have to do it again. The pool is such a big expense but it was here when we bought the house so now we own it!

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      4. Carol anne Avatar

        I’d love to have a pool 🤗🤗

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      5. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        Well, when we first got here the pool looked fabulous. Little did we know that the paint was peeling and to our dismay we found that the type of pool it is cannot be fixed like a normal pool. Anyhow, we got a new coating on it but I battled for months trying to keep frogs out of it. It was so disgusting. Then the new coating started to peel. Long story short, we finally found a company that knows how to fix this specific pool and they are starting the week of the 24th. After that I am switching it over to salt water to reap the benefits of the better water and to keep out the frogs! I won’t lie though, it is nice to have.

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      6. Carol anne Avatar

        I would like to have a pool, but I wouldn’t like if there were frogs in it 💛💛

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      7. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        I used to like frogs…I have tattoos of frogs, little tree frogs, but now I can’t stand them. The kind that were going in the pool were disgusting. I can’t even stand to think about them.

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      8. Carol anne Avatar

        I don’t blame you, I wouldn’t like them either 🌺🌺

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      9. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        They are called Cuban tree frogs and they are an invasive species to Florida. The state tells people to kill them because they eat all the other frogs, lizards and even snakes. I can’t even begin to tell you how disgusting they are.

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      10. Carol anne Avatar

        Wow! Are the frogs poisonous? I would be freaking out if I had to deal with those 😀

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      11. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

        I don’t know if they are poisonous to humans but they are to animals if they try to bite them. My dog just barks at them to tell me where they are. Once the pool is salt water I won’t have to deal with it.

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      12. Carol anne Avatar

        Oh good 😊

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  9. rothpoetry Avatar

    Well done, Carol Anne. Rain has a way of soothing for some and an aggravation for other. Sorry it keeps you awake!

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      At least it has stopped for now 💓💓

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      1. Carol anne Avatar

        😀 thanks, Dwight! xoxo

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  10. Ali Grimshaw Avatar

    That is a great deal of rain. Wishing you a restful dry spell.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Ali! ❤

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  11. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    I love this poem although I am sorry that the rain disturbs you so – my partner and I lived in Ireland for ten years so I am familiar with that weather, though it is much the same here at the moment. I found a new favourite song to play on my ukulele and sing which fits the bill –

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      That is cool that you lived in Ireland for 10 years, which part of Ireland, did you live in? Cool song to by the way 🌺🌺🌺

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      1. Frewin55 Avatar
        Frewin55

        Rathlee in County Sligo. My sister, who died last year had been living around and about the North-West since the late 80’s

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        Oh, so sorry to hear of your sisters passing, I’ve never been to Sligo. X

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      3. Frewin55 Avatar
        Frewin55

        Which part of Ireland do you live in?

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      4. Carol anne Avatar

        I live in Cork! I am in Cork city. I love it here. Xx

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