The fan begins its soft, low whirr,
A breath of code, a hum of thought.
Its steady tone will not defer,
The fan begins its soft, low whirr.
Like distant seas that softly stir,
It cools the heat that silence brought.
The fan begins its soft, low whirr,
A breath of code, a hum of thought.
38 responses to “A triolet #W3 We’ave written weekly”
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What a masterful and evocative poem. You’ve taken a mundane, modern object—a computer fan—and woven it into a meditation on technology, creativity, and silence. The triolet form, with its gentle repetitions, is the perfect choice, mirroring the constant, rhythmic whirr of the fan itself. The lines “A breath of code, a hum of thought” are particularly brilliant, personifying the machine and blurring the line between the digital and the conscious in a way that is both cool and deeply thoughtful. It finds the soul in the silicon. A wonderful, resonant piece of writing.
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Thanks, yes I couldn’t believe how well the poem turned out 💜💜
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Yes, maybe 😄
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Thank you, Val 🖤🖤
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Thanks, Sally 😘😘
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Thank you, Sara 💜💜
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Hi, Carol Anne!
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Artie, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/10/29/w3-prompt-183-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
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