My nose, once proud, now sealed in gloom,
A fortress of congestion’s doom.
Each breath’s a quest through mist and pain,
A wheezy wind across the plain.

My throat, a desert lined with flame,
Each swallow plays a cruel game.
Tea and honey wage their fight,
Yet comfort flees into the night.

My head’s a cloud, my thoughts are slow,
The world drifts by in muffled woe.
A tissue mountain by my bed,
A crown of sniffles on my head.

Oh health! You fickle, fleeting guest,
Return, I beg, and grant me rest.
Till then I cough, I groan, I sneeze—
And dream of breathing clear with ease.

12 responses to “Ode to the common cold”

  1. Ana Daksina Avatar

    Oh, Carol Anne! You had me wheezing too, but with laughter… Talk about a subject absolutely everyone can relate to! 😂

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Yeah, we can all relate to that, can’t we? Xx

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      1. Ana Daksina Avatar

        Not a single one who cannot! Hope you are feeling better 💖

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      2. Carol anne Avatar

        I’m a lot better now, Anna, thank you 💖💖

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  2. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Oh golly, great poem but not so great you’re not feeling good. Take good care Carol anne! ❣️

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thank you, Cindy 🤍🤍🤣💖🤍🤣💛

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  3. Nicole Smith Avatar

    LOL, this is a great poem. If you are sick, I hope you feel better quick.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      I am sick Nicole, and I’m still not feeling 100% 😆😁

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  4. Lauren Scott, Author Avatar

    Your words are relatable, Carol Anne. Not fun at all, but I hope you feel better real soon! xo

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks, Lauren 💕💕

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