#MFFFC 28th October

The fog hung heavy in the air, wrapping the world in silken uncertainty. Eliza pulled her coat tighter around her shoulders and stepped onto the crumbling dirt road. Ancient oaks stood sentry, their gnarled branches clawing at the sky, silhouetted against a muted dawn. Each footfall stirred the earthy scent of damp leaves, blending with the crispness of autumn air, and she inhaled deeply, invigorated by the chill.

The road stretched ahead, a winding serpent disappearing into the ghostly white. Eliza walked slowly, each step deliberate, savoring the tranquil stillness that enveloped her. In the distance, the faint sound of a woodpecker echoed, a reminder of life hidden beneath the shroud. She closed her eyes for a moment, allowing the sounds of nature to wash over her, lulling her anxiety like a lullaby.

Time felt fluid here, as if the fog was both protector and thief. She thought of her grandmother’s stories, how she once walked this very path, whispering secrets to the trees. Today, it was Eliza’s turn to confide in the silence. “What am I doing?” she murmured, the question hanging heavy in the cool air.

As she trudged forward, the familiar rustle of leaves whispered encouragement. She recalled the life she left behind—an uninspired routine, the relentless buzz of city living. In this hazy isolation, she could be anything, even someone who had the courage to choose differently.

Breaking through the fog, a silver glimmer caught her eye. A lone deer emerged, hesitant yet curious. They regarded each other, two souls suspended in the moment, before it bounded away into the mist. With a newfound purpose, Eliza quickened her pace, leaving behind not just the fog, but all that had once tethered her.

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9 responses to “#MFFFC 28th October”

  1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Great take on the prompt, Carol

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Shweta! ❤

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  2. Sadje Avatar

    A very beautifully written story

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        🌺🌸🙏🏼

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  3. D. Mitchell Avatar

    This is beautiful! It reminds me of where I live in the fall!

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  4. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    I love the road as “a winding serpent disappearing into the ghostly white”, and the fog as “both protector and thief”. There is a sense of mystery here, like the beginning of a new adventure.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

      Thanks Melissa 🙂 ❤

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