As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting the sky in hues of orange and lavender, Clara nestled into the worn wicker chair on her balcony. The hum of cicadas filled the air, a rhythmic backdrop to the gentle rustling of the wind through the leaves. She cradled a glass of coffee flavored spritz, the ice clinking against the crystal like laughter amidst a summer’s sigh.

Each sip was a dance of sweetness and effervescence, a reminder of the bright days spent poolside with friends who had scattered across the country. Clara let the drink linger on her tongue, savoring the moment. The sun’s final rays swirled like molten gold in her cocktail, and she tilted the glass to catch the last glimmers. With a soft smile, she closed her eyes, imagining the warmth of those moments: sun-kissed skin, carefree giggles, and the splatter of cannonballs.

A rusty swing in the park below squeaked, followed by carefree shouts of children playing until dusk. Clara leaned back and felt the universe pulse around her, a mosaic of laughter and light. She thought of life—how it was both fleeting and eternal, each evening offering a new chance, a new palette of colors.

Just as she surrendered to the blissful stillness, an unexpected splash jolted her eyes open. Below, a renegade boy had leapt into the local fountain, sending droplets shimmering into the evening air like tiny diamonds. Clara chuckled, her laughter merging with the evening chorus.

She raised her glass to him, a silent toast to spontaneity and joy. The summer’s warmth wrapped around her like a familiar embrace, reminding her that life, just like this cocktail, was best enjoyed one sip at a time.

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4 responses to “Drinking a cocktail in the summer sun #MFFFC”

  1. Ana Daksina Avatar

    Powerful ending lines are a real challenge for most writers to come up with ~ but you often mail them 👌

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      Thanks sweet Ana! ❤ your always so encouraging!

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  2. Ana Daksina Avatar

    Sorry, that’s “nail them” 🔨

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