#Fowc Raw emotions

emotions bubble up
raw, and real
feelings simmer
beneath the surface
Of my mind
I try to push them away
to no avail
They penetrate every fibre of my being
Until I
Let them out
Little by little
I open up
As my world comes crashing down around me

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12 responses to “#Fowc Raw emotions”

  1. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    You express the pain so vividly. Writing about pain is what got me started with poetry, and now, when I can remember, I try to write a resolution too – a flip side to such grief to balance the score. Immediately after reading this poem, I found myself adding: “and as every time, I rise again, pull myself from the depths.”

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    1. Carol Anne Avatar

      wo! yeah! I do! So true! Thanks, VJ!

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      1. V.J. Knutson Avatar

        My pleasure, Carol Anne.

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      2. Carol Anne Avatar

        🙂 xoxo Love to you!

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  2. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

    Well written, but so sad. 😥

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    1. Carol Anne Avatar

      I’m ok, just needed to express the pain today!

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      1. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

        So sorry, Sweetie! 😍 😘

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      2. Carol Anne Avatar

        🙂 its ok, love to you! xoxo

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  3. Fandango Avatar

    That was definitely raw. You expressed those raw feelings very well.

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    1. Carol Anne Avatar

      Thanks Fandango! 🙂

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  4. Fiery Females Avatar

    The last line shakes you up.

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    1. Carol anne Avatar

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