Please note, I got the form wrong, I was confused and didn’t write three stanzas but I did write too, but I still think I’ve got it wrong so please excuse me I’m new to all this LOL In the spring I saw the daffodils
Popping up their exquisite heads
So I asked those gorgeous daffodils
Yellow, red?
They answered me in a chorus
Bowing as they did
Those sweet smelling yellow daffodils
So vivid!
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I love the imagery of those daffodils…
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Thank you 🙂 that makes me so happy even though I did my poem wrong. I’m too lazy to go back and fix it LOL 🖤🖤
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My fave flower
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Yes, daffodils are beautiful flowers 😁
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The question of color makes a lot more sense reading in your blog that you are blind. What does yellow mean indeed? And yet the scent of yellow!
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I always think of yellow as a very bright colour, bright and radiant. That is just from what people have said about it, the scent of yellow, like lemons. Yes, that’s the scent of yellow. 💖💖
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The smells I associate with yellow are ripe mangoes 💛
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I wish we had mangos growing where I live! How cool would that be!
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True! I think you’d like the smell!
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Oh I definitely would! xo
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Wondering if you can find frozen mango cubes or if not, dried mango strips! The dried strips are a popular snack in our part of Asia though to us, they smell slightly different from fresh mango haha
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I look for them, not sure if I can find them. I know we can get frozen mango, but not sure about the dried strips. 🎀☺️
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Frozen mango then! Smells like fresh ripe mango in our opinion. We like it with plain yoghurt 😀
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That sounds good to me 💛💛
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I like what you did, Carol Anne. Seems to flow very well. It is very close to the form. Daffodils are wonderful. Are they poking through in your country yet? Mine have a couple of heads and will probably open by the weekend.
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Nope, unfortunately they aren’t up here yet soon though very soon I hope 🎀😚💕
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:>)
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I look forward to seeing them in spring.
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So do I Grace! Can’t wait! 🙂
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Thank you; I have never thought of that, how the form of the flower says something about the colour. And you suggest uniformity does as well, or, perhaps you mean the heavy crown. Well written! By the way, daffodil in Norwegian is “easter lily”.
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Oh how nice! I love that its easter lily! xo
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I smiled at the visual of their bowing heads. We’re still in the middle winter here. It’s going to be a couple of months before their bright hues light up my days. Nicely done.
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Oh we are still in the middle of winter here in Ireland, too! But I can dream, right? Lol. I want spring! xo
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I love daffodils! They might be my favorite flowers. We have lots of them in our yard in the spring.
You certainly captured their spirit. They always seem like happy flowers to me–tulips are sort of aloof. 🙂
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Yeah! I love daffodils too! They are so nice! 🙂
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They are!
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😄💞
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I think most of us got this form wrong. I’d rather have daffodils anyway 🙂
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Aww thanks Jane! I appreciate you! Xx
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xxx
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💟😘😘
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