Fandango’s flash fiction challenge #70

This week I am participating in fandango’s flash fiction challenge!
This weeks photo, is of passengers in a dining car on a train!

The dining car of the train was full. The noise was intense. Everyone was clammering to get in line to place their orders. The train was moving at top speed.
Hurry up, come on, said one man dramatically.
We’ll be at the station at this rate before any of our orders are taken!
The girl behind the counter sighed.
I’m going as fast as I can, have patience, she said.
All of a sudden the man reached out and punched her square in the face!
She fell backwards and screamed.
Shit! You ass, what do you think your doing?
At that moment she pulled the emergency cord. The conductor of the train came running.
What is going on here he boomed?
The man who’d hit the girl behind the counter was irate!
She was too slow about taking our orders he said angrily.
Well young man, said the conductor, if you think you can do better, come on!
But no, before you try I’m calling the police!
You will not get away with this sort of behaviour on our train!
With that, he phoned the police, and an ambulance.


Author: Carol anne

I am a woman in my mid 30's. I'm blind and I have dissociative identity disorder, I also have complex PTSD. I blog about my life with these disorders. I live in Ireland.

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